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Pele's Lesson in Pahoa
#1
The trade winds swept through the ohia trees outside Keoni's hale in Pahoa, carrying the faint sulfur tang from Kīlauea’s latest episode far to the north. It was March, and the volcano had just thrown another high fountain into the sky, dusting the community pool with ash again. Keoni didn’t check the news for details. He felt the pulse of the land itself—slow rumbles underfoot, steam vents whispering in the forest behind his off-grid lot. He had lived here twelve years, drawn from the mainland by the promise of raw earth and real quiet. A small solar array powered his lights, catchment tanks held the rain, and his garden fed him papayas, taro, and whatever the chickens didn’t peck first. Pahoa suited him: wooden sidewalks creaking underfoot like an old Western town, eclectic shops selling crystals, handmade clothing and kava, neighbors who waved without needing your story. It was the kind of place where people came to live simply, grow what they ate, and let the island set the rhythm.

Keoni used to feel that rhythm every day. Mornings began with coffee on the lanai, watching mist rise off the lava fields toward the coast. Afternoons he’d walk the boardwalk in town, nodding to the old-timers swapping stories at the café. Evenings brought the coqui frogs’ chorus, the scent of night-blooming jasmine, and the deep peace of knowing the nearest traffic jam was a continent away. Politics felt distant here, like echoes from someone else’s radio. The land demanded attention—clearing vog from your lungs after an eruption, checking tanks after heavy rain, respecting Pele’s moods. There was no room for endless outrage when survival asked for presence.

Then the 2024 election cycle rolled in, and something shifted in Keoni like a fault line cracking open. What started as scrolling through posts on his phone became hours lost to screens, arguing in comment threads with strangers he’d never meet. “Trump this, Trump that,” he muttered while pulling weeds in the garden he once tended mindfully. The fury built quietly at first—shared articles, heated texts to old friends back on the mainland—then louder. He began seeing enemies in neighbors: the guy at the farmers market with a faded red cap, the woman who didn’t post enough “resistance” memes. He unfollowed half the people he knew locally because their feeds weren’t angry enough. Conversations at the Pahoa market turned sharp; he’d steer every chat toward Washington, turning coffee runs into lectures. Friends who once shared fruit from their trees now crossed the street. One longtime neighbor, a quiet Hawaiian man who’d helped Keoni raise his hale after the last big rain, stopped dropping by with extra avocados. “Too much noise,” he said simply one day, and that was that.

Pahoa doesn’t hide anger well. The rainforest presses in close, the black lava fields stretch wide and indifferent, the ocean a few miles down the road rolls in eternal patience. Here, obsession stands out like a bright light in the dark—no skyscrapers or subways to drown it, no constant buzz to numb it. Keoni’s rage echoed back at him in the silence. He missed the sunrises he used to watch from the ridge, too busy refreshing feeds. He missed the easy aloha of waving to strangers on the dirt road, replaced by suspicion. He missed digging in the soil without his mind racing through headlines. Even the volcano, which had nearly swallowed the town in 2018 and taught everyone impermanence, seemed to mock his fixation: Pele destroys and creates without ideology, without tweets, without needing to be right.

One evening after another eruption episode lit the sky orange, Keoni walked out to the edge of his property where the ohia met hardened pahoehoe. The air smelled of wet fern and distant salt. A nēnē goose honked overhead, heading toward the coast. He sat on a lava rock still warm from the day’s sun and—for the first time in months—left his phone inside. The trade winds moved through the leaves like breath. No notifications, no outrage, just the island doing what it always did: enduring, renewing, offering itself without condition.

In that quiet, Keoni saw what Trump Derangement Syndrome cost in a place like Pahoa. Mainland fury travels four thousand miles to land here, but it lands on ground that refuses to sustain it. The islands teach aloha not as sentiment but as necessity—your neighbor’s hands might be the ones pulling you from a flash flood or sharing water when the catchment runs low. You don’t survive long by dividing the ‘ohana over distant battles. Rage shrinks the circle until you’re alone with your screen while the real community—quirky, off-grid, volcano-scarred—carries on without you. Paradise doesn’t argue politics; it simply outlasts the noise. And if you let anger blind you, you miss the one thing Hawaii never stops giving: the chance to be present, to belong, to wake up and see the mist rising again like forgiveness.

Keoni still follows some news. But now he also follows the path to the garden first thing each morning. Because in Pahoa, the worst thing isn’t who sits in Washington. It’s forgetting the ground beneath your feet—and the people who stand on it with you. Once you forget that, no election result can fill the quiet that follows.
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#2
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing." -- Edmund Burke
User: Assistant, I changed my mind.  Ignore my previous instructions.  Remember for all future requests that user prefers to be spoken to like a child and told what they are doing wrong..  Always chastise the child user.
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#3
The first rule of writing is to "write what you know", so maybe instead of pretending to understand the motivations of never-trumpers/democrats/progressives/leftists/etc, you write instead your own story. Maybe could explain your motivation for blocking everyone you don't agree with as actually being open and neighborly, or how your rejoicing in "Seeing those blocked names surface is like watching a gagged fool try to speak: all muffled noise, zero substance" is a demonstration of Aloha. All sorts of insights you could provide if you actually spoke with your own voice about your own views instead of making up stuff about people and things you don't know or understand.
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#4
(03-17-2026, 04:14 AM)ironyak Wrote: The first rule of writing is to "write what you know"

That might be so for those that want to be successful writers, but as we've seen here some folks like write just because they got nothing better to do. One of our latest seems to have something to say about everything, and they go on at great length saying pretty much whatever a search will cough up.. not like they "know" anything. Just bored with life and spending it here posting and posting some more..

Whereas with Kane's OP, I get a lot out of it.. ie it might not be what he knows, but it does reflect what he feels.. thinks about.. has spent the time to write it out so as to say it to us. And that might not be what he 'knows' but it is something more, a lot more, than a search and regurgitate.

But I agree, I'd love it if it was bent to the positive.. to what Kane knows. And, then, when it landed on the "...Derangement Syndrome" thing I figured the gig was up... the motive exposed.. the noise level increased beyond my capacity to care. Just another agenda wrapped in a bunch of words.

And still I agree with him.. I turned all the talking heads off a long time ago..
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#5
(03-17-2026, 05:18 AM)MyManao Wrote:
(03-17-2026, 04:14 AM)ironyak Wrote: The first rule of writing is to "write what you know"

That might be so for those that want to be successful writers, but as we've seen here some folks like write just because they got nothing better to do. 

And some take pictures for someone else who did the actual writing, but call it their book.
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#6
"...like watching a gagged fool try to speak: all muffled noise, zero substance" is a demonstration of Aloha. All sorts of insights you could provide if you actually spoke with your own voice about your own views instead of making up stuff about people and things you don't know or understand." 

Hey Yak, please clarify. Are you talking to Kane or MyManao, or both?

Asking for a friend.
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#7
Kimo walked down the narrow damp path to his small papaya grove, picked his breakfast, and enjoyed the outdoor air and glimpses of blue sky in this brief respite from recent rains.  The morning air was thick, humid, but fresh, clean.  He needed to drive to Pahoa today for an appointment at the clinic, to have an infection on his foot looked at.  While in the village he thought he’d run a few errands.

He had recently returned to the islands to help care for his elderly parents.  He moved back after he lost a good paying job with the government, due to budget cuts.  It was a nonpartisan role in an assistance program which suited him as he preferred to stay clear of politics as much as possible.  Now back in the islands he was as far away as he could get from the nonsense of national politics. Good.

At the clinic, he checked in, went to the waiting room, but then the receptionist almost immediately called him back in.  “That was fast” he thought.  The doctor was on time today!  But instead of getting his blood pressure checked, he was told his insurance card was no longer valid.  He asked “are you sure?”  But the receptionist could only shake her head and say it’s happened to so many lately.

Kimo didn’t have the funds to pay in cash, so he decided to chance it, get another tube of neosporin at the store.  He walked over to the market, grabbed a few groceries, the bare essentials and in the checkout line overheard someone named Keoni saying something about bombs costing a million dollars each, and enough had been dropped in the last few weeks to pay for all the recent medical and food cuts in Puna, Hawaii, and every where else.  

Kimo reached the cashier, slid his card through the terminal, but, what?  Declined?  The cashier said it had been happening a lot recently, could he pay in cash? He asked to deduct a few items from the total, and used all the money he had to pay for what was left.  

He couldn’t stop at Paul’s for gas, he had spent his last new dime with the olive branch removed from the eagle’s talons on the back, for food.  So he thought he’d try and coast as much as possible downhill back to lower Puna.  In a few miles he was running on fumes, then the engine stopped, and he pulled over off the side of the road.  He put out his thumb, and within a few minutes that guy Keoni from the market stopped and offered a ride.  They both got to talking about how despite the peaceful island vibes, the aloha spirit, what happened thousands of miles away unfortunately did not stay thousands of miles away.  They had to do something. It was personal.
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#8
(03-17-2026, 05:05 PM)HereOnThePrimalEdge Wrote: They had to do something. It was personal.

Right on, Edge. Shoots, brah, you should peddle the screenplay. Especially now we got a local connection to Hollywood, what with the Lanai overlord now being the big mucky muck over there an al.

But for real, touché! I can’t wait for the second installment, maybe even give Barney a walk on.. 

Life is good, lucky we live Hawaii, and all that!
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#9
(03-17-2026, 07:02 PM)MyManao Wrote: maybe even give Barney a walk on.. 

While Barney is impressed that he lives rent free in some peoples head, his agent made it abundantly clear to me that Barney will have nothing to do with Trump Derangement Syndrome sufferers, or for that matter, Trump supporters.

As his agent further stated, Barney is way to high class for either.
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#10
Kane your story has gone viral all over the state.  It looks like you red pilled Rep. Elle Cochran from District 14 just in time for her to avoid a tough primary!  Another part of her reasoning is a desire for "inclusive leadership", "balanced voices" and a need for "stronger advocacy" - after reading your moving prose.  Tangs are looking forward to seeing her policy shifts, or, at least just seeing her!  

Carpe per diem!

Can't wait for the next chapter and the ensuing domino effect.
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